I need critics for this song i improv'd, please

[Caprice]

http://homepage.mac.com/joshayala/FileSharing16.html


i finnaly got an effects pedal and was messing around then improv'd this. its the first one i actually like, alot

tell me what you think, i think it resembles electronic music. well, technically it is - electric guitar.


please give me your opinions, thanks!

[Emmet]

it sounds like someone twiddling around on a guitar...electronic music is aint.

[Tom]

Yay emmet are back!

I demand new live videos

[holden]

Electric isn't necessarily electronic. Sounds like a bit of chorus, reverb and a slight delay. But i think i know what you're getting at... i have a DigiTech stompbox that's full of effects, and if you tweak it a lot, you can make the guitar freak out like a keyboard or videogame!

Anyway, the song itself is a little difficult for me to get into, lots of notes but not a lot of structure to make me recall any part of it. Not that it has to be "verse chorus verse" structure or anything, but it was a lil random.

Keep at it, though! Add a backing track, and i'm sure it'll improve!

[Caprice]

Holden, i love you. not only because we both like the same book so much.


Yes it was very random. ive only been playing the guitar for 6 months, actually 7 almost. and im only beginning to venture into the improv (solo) realm. I have a friend who can play increibly well. he can improv to anything, in any note (A,B,C,G, etc.) he said he'd teach me someday how to improv to notes so i can make any improv go with any mood of a song.

i think that day is very very soon

anyway, thanks for the kind words!