and: the poetry thread

[jOHN rODRIGUEZ]

Originally Posted by Caprice

[those are fantastic Andrea! truly!]




i looked down the road on her, sitting, waiting, asking me with her eyes. on the chair i sat with her glance fixed upon my glare. we've got high life and coors light. high life i said.
in she went and out came my cigarettes. one in mouth, flame ablazed and a puff later she appeared. smiling with those bull's eyes.
the air was dry. like something dirty that is clean because it is all dead. we starred each other into conversation, mindless conversation that brings pause to this life we know so well. brings a solace embrace to this neutral hotel.
round 2 for beers, this time, its dark, and bitter. she finishes it for me, and i walk her to the car.
without hesitation, lips touch in a fierce contact. soft, and dirty, we tasted like cigarettes, and we liked it.
i lift her upon the car and unfold my lips upon her. no words, no denial. feeling and better all the more.
open the car i say. i have to go she says. dabs and dabs we give, trying to get away from each other. almost like magnets we never stop.

in a final breath we say bye and i walk my way.

and that, is my night

That's brilliant.