Quote:
Originally Posted by TheBang
How about these corrections:
"the rhythm of an engine deep and throaty"
The rhythm of wheels
The rhythm of heels
as we fall into the sun
She walk on silver
She walk on gold
Paints i love you on the alley walls
for the eyes that hide behind black glasses
Sunlight hits everyone she passes
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Yeah, you are right, changed to reflect your edits.