How about these corrections:
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Originally Posted by BrotherLovesDub
the rhythm of an engine deep and throating (?)
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"the rhythm of an engine deep and throaty"
Quote:
Originally Posted by BrotherLovesDub
The rhthym of wheels
The rhthym of heels
That we fall into the sun
She walk on silver
She walk on gold
Paints i love you on the alley walls
From the eyes that hide behind black glasses
Sunlight hits tell me what she passes
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The rhythm of wheels
The rhythm of heels
as we fall into the sun
She walk on silver
She walk on gold
Paints i love you on the alley walls
for the eyes that hide behind black glasses
Sunlight hits everyone she passes