Thread: Barking Lyrics
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Old 07-16-2010, 05:58 PM
TheBang
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Re: Barking Lyrics
How about these corrections:

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Originally Posted by BrotherLovesDub View Post
the rhythm of an engine deep and throating (?)
"the rhythm of an engine deep and throaty"

Quote:
Originally Posted by BrotherLovesDub View Post
The rhthym of wheels
The rhthym of heels
That we fall into the sun
She walk on silver
She walk on gold
Paints i love you on the alley walls
From the eyes that hide behind black glasses
Sunlight hits tell me what she passes
The rhythm of wheels
The rhythm of heels
as we fall into the sun
She walk on silver
She walk on gold
Paints i love you on the alley walls
for the eyes that hide behind black glasses
Sunlight hits everyone she passes