[dubman]

i mean structurally, the rhythm of the song is really awkward, like the transition between different sections always sounds a fraction of a second from not working at all. while the actual rhythm of the song may be nothing new, the different sounds come together rather well, i thought.

may not be a reason to like the song, really. but i do think it's a huge departure from 'with teeth' simply because he's not obsessing over himself so much anymore. which is good, because 40 yr olds who still have 17 yr old problems was off putting after he turned 30.
so combine the fact that i can barely hear him and that he's got a great visual of his own dystopia means i'm totally going along with it.
i do hope the story has got some depth. it souldnt be terribly hard considering the setup...