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Re: Wotw...
Don't read on if you don't know how it ends...
... but the ending is rushed. It could have been really tense if there were more scenes dealing with the demise of the invaders, and how the characters wouldn't be sure if that was really happening - sneaking about not knowing whether they were in danger or not. That's got to be better than <cough> <cough> <splat> <whoopee>.
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