I'd say it's pretty decent. The bassline is good and works along with the beats to keep it moving. It does get a bit repetitive (although I understand that it's sort of supposed to with this kind of techno
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I think what is missing primarily is "production value". All the sounds sound kinda dead and a bit unintersting, which is probably partly to blame on Reason, but mostly just experience so the best advice is to just keep going and experimenting. If you're up for it, experiment with effects and processing; delays, reverb, modulation fx, compression, distortion etc... There's lots to learn from resources on the web or in magazines (like SoundonSound).