My 2 cents: I don't like the beats, they're too simple (as in, taken from Reason without changing it too much) and the kick-drum is a bit cheesy I think. The sounds are ok, although I agree with Nooneishere, the 2-noted melody could use variation. The bassline thingy becomes pretty cool at 1:40 or so. It could use some extra sound(s) to keep the 5:42 minutes more interesting.
This just isn't really my thing. But considering it's your hobby, keep on going
. Making music is a great way to use your creativity, so I recommend it to everybody.
The song reminds me of Groove Armada - Final Shakedown
And a question, how long have you been making music?