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Forum: bound. 04-21-2011, 02:30 PM
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Re: you

i bet you could make your point with half as many words
Forum: bound. 04-21-2011, 02:28 PM
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you
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Posted By BrotherLovesDub
Re: you

i don't hate your poem but i don't love it either. i think the last line would be better if you removed 'of your audi'. i also think the reference to hermes would be better if the theme was carried...
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