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BeautifulBurnout 08-13-2007 12:52 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by crazysugarboy
I think I have answered my own question - 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllabuls?

Yep!

In it's purest form it ought to have some reference to a season in it or something seasonal.

patrick 08-13-2007 01:02 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by potatobroth
necessary change
darktrain replaces dirty
porn site blocked at work

hahahah ! perfect!

crazysugarboy 08-13-2007 01:54 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
ok, my first attempt - it's a bit literall rather than lyrical

"this coming autumn
underworld heal and restore
with their banging beats"

crazysugarboy 08-13-2007 02:10 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
The "banging beats" is a paraphrase from the Phil Jupitous/6music interview (I love the bit when phil asks karl re the sunshine soundtrack "is he [Danny Boyle] allowing you to bang?" Anyway, new version reads:

"This coming autumn
underworld heals and restores
with beautiful beats"

Btw, this is a truly lovely thread, and very much in keeping with the spirit of u/w i.e they are highly creative ppl, with the tomato project, and the daily links to artistic/design thingeys

the mongoose 08-13-2007 09:45 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
oblivion leak
beautiful music for us
please before autumn

;)

Bargo 08-13-2007 11:42 PM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Hello Karl and Rick,
please bring your sweet sounds back to
Australia soon
;)

or maybe

I simply can't wait
for Oblivion with Bells
roll on october!!

stimpee 08-14-2007 02:46 AM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Karl give me guest list
for the sold out london shows
I left it too late

big screen satellite 08-14-2007 03:38 AM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by stimpee
Karl give me guest list
for the sold out london shows
I left it too late

u sure... only thursday is sold out....

but nice try anyway

crazysugarboy 08-14-2007 07:02 AM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Bored at work, so have thought of another:

"First song crocodile
hints at dazzling things to come
when golden leaves fall"

spacejunk 08-14-2007 07:47 AM

Re: An Underworld Haiku
 
Sunrise, overwhelmed
Underworld (heavenly hell)
Ring in those sweet bells


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